« New film written! »

It's been thru 2 rewrites and the 3rd version is gonna be the last of what I'm hoping will be a tense thriller. I'm sure there will be heaps of changes along the way but I rekon the writing is to a stage I can move on with and get into the storyboarding.

To get it to this stage I spent the past 6 months pondering ideas of what would make a cool film, written about 6000 words in notes, read a book about screen writing, changed concept direction 4 times, written 3 versions of the story, removed themes I thought would be awesome that weren't, added a 3 shot scene that turned into the entire final act, decided to use live action and not just animation, found out that writing an indepth story takes time an a fair bit of brain power and had muchos fun connecting the points of intrigue into a comprehendible story.

The final written version is currently only existing on 21 hand written cards making up 6 main scenes.

Coming up next :

• A synopsis of the dark story where murder is punished immediately with dramatic justice.

• The final title!